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4月3日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 从网上看新闻是件好事吗?

发布(bu)时间:2021-04-07 关键词:雅思大作文

摘要:More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

      2021年(nian)4月3雅思大作文题目

  More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

  高分范文及解析

  01、With news online dispersing like wildfire [独立主格作(zuo)状语], the heyday of the newspaper industry and television news programs has gone. I tend to think this trend irresistible and positive [表态].This [逻辑衔接]is partly because the Internet — a vast storehouse of digital information — is convenient for people to dig for previous news, whereas [对比(bi)] neither the printed paper material nor the TV programs are easy to preserve for information searching.

  解析

  Ø在第一段(duan)表态(positive)

  Ø并点(dian)出第一点(dian)积极之处(信息量大,方便读者搜索以(yi)往新(xin)闻)

  02、The mass quantity of news online[逻(luo)辑衔接(jie)] also benefits from its fast update speed. This [逻(luo)辑衔接(jie)] edge allows netizens to obtain any story from the blog of a witness the second it happens, which is remarkable and more importantly, life-saving when disasters happen. Newspapers and TV programs on the other hand [逻(luo)辑衔接(jie)] need time for editing, censoring, printing, and delivering, extending people’s access to news about the world to at least the next day.

  解析

  Ø 第二(er)段继续点(dian)出积极之(zhi)处(更新(xin)速度快,读者(zhe)能(neng)迅(xun)速获取新(xin)闻)

  03、Despite these [逻(luo)辑(ji)衔接(jie)], news online is still portable, with palm-sized technological gadgets only. Typically, for people in a hurry in the morning, convenience and mobility are always preferred, and this is why [逻(luo)辑(ji)衔接(jie)] they would like to browse breaking news from a handhold phone on the subway rather than spend minutes in front of the TV or carry a thick stack of paper materials out.

  解析

  Ø 乘胜(sheng)追击,再点(dian)积极(ji)之处(便(bian)携)

  04、However[逻辑(ji)衔接], the demerits of accessing e-news cannot be denied. To get more traffic, some news editors no longer interview in person but fabricate, releasing inauthentic news online. Consuming such information [逻辑(ji)衔接], the public is hard not to be misled.

  解析

  Ø转而(er)写一点消(xiao)极之(zhi)处(鱼龙(long)混杂(za),易被误导)

  05、In conclusion, I think the growth of online newspaper is positive. The main point is that government should superintend the released information and news writers should have a fact-finding attitude.

  解析(xi)

  Ø 最后一(yi)段不仅(jin)是总(zong)结上文(wen),还给出了在此(ci)基础(chu)上的一(yi)些合理建议。

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